In the article" Fair Play," the author Sheryl Bergmann Drewe discusses the issues of fraud in sports competitions of athletes. The athletes take performance enhance drugs (PEDs) to high achievement in the game, but they do not prove the talent of athletes. The ban on PEDs in sports to clean competitions, healthy and fair. The author claims that using PEDs will have negatives for athletes. First of all, taking PEDs affecs to the health. Second, using PEDs affects supporters. Last, PEDs affects ethics of athletes use them. Drewe states that for sports competitions are fair, the athletes can use PEDs in the sports because they would keep competitions equal with ability and ethical of athletes.
This article does not have the date of publication; however it has a very high level of trust to the reader because the author is a professor in the University of Manitoba, and it is the publisher chooses to include in lessons of 600 levels. Also, this article get information from Fair Play Sports, Values and Society ( R.Smimon). To sum up, in this article the author wants to send to the athletes about the influence when using PEDs.
From this article I think PEDs should be banned in all cases in the sport, and athletes will bring beauty and fairness for sports.
Reference: Drewe, Sheryl, Fair Play
Jose Canseco Mar/17/2005 Should Performance Enhancing Drugs( Such as Steroids) Be Accepted in Sports? Procon.org August/ 8/ 2016, August/16/2016 http://sportsanddrugs.procon.org/
Good work here and I see some improvement with sentence structure. The last part of the AB is for you to state where in the essay you will use (or have used) the information. You should also describe exactly what information you will use.
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